Thursday, February 1, 2018

I Can Die Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fire of dissatisfaction on me
Delayed I to know myself
Yeah its justice I can't deny...
I walk on that street which ending is lost
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Terry Craddock 09 September 2020

Into Darkness Dust Death Sleep shadow dawn to shadow dust we crawl stumble through youth muscle walk our way into maturity slow frail creep our way into old age from darkness dust birth born into darkness dust death sleep Inspired by the poem 'I Can Die' by the poet MAHTAB BANGALEE. Dedicated to the poet MAHTAB BANGALEE.

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Terry Craddock 05 September 2020

from shadow dawn to shadow dust, we crawl stumble through youth, muscle walk our way into maturity, then slow frail creep our way into old age, from darkness dust birth born into darkness dust death sleep

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 July 2020

Danger! ! Lost! Cost of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 January 2019

nice poem of the day.. it is endless drive, to survive... real 10

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 December 2018

I walk on that street which ending is lost......which has no end. stray beggar symphony, death......... again your ability to express in a very original way.. than k u dear Mahtab. tony

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