Tuesday, January 10, 2012

I Can Comments

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I can offer a beam of light
to put a glow upon your path...
I can wrap you in my soul
to protect you from the wrath....
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(De Va)
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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 17 January 2012

i can send the sun and let you bath in its rays....... very caring poem..i like it a lot ma!

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Deep Mukherjee 11 January 2012

words can really express the purity of the heart; it's true........in that sense you are gifted........

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Silentpoet Grl 11 January 2012

A very caring and heart felt poem. Can feel the warmth of your words... You are truly a gifted poet.

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Eric Cockrell 10 January 2012

beautiful poem, beautiful heart revealed!

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Dave Walker 10 January 2012

So very beautiful poem. A very calming read. Beautiful.

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Unwritten Soul 10 January 2012

Oh Such a sweet words splashing to other readers, Silent poet girl must be smiling reading this, well DeVa if you can make that just make it, may under protection you both be very close to protect each other..nice sweet cake here hahahaha_Unwritten Soul

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