Friday, April 20, 2007

I Call Your Name In The Night Comments

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I call your name in the night
Hoping, mercy will be granted on this soul
And you will come to me.
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Alejandra Olivas
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Jazib Kamalvi 21 December 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Alejandra. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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THE FIRST SHRIKE 21 April 2007

For whoms name is it do you call, or does he have a name at ll? If this question that you have ask, then he whom you call will come at last.

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Delilah Miller 20 April 2007

And then I start to wonder if that person will ever come. I like this poem; it's memorable, and a keen topic, the feeling of being dissapointed and you can't even be angry about it. Xs and Os

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Alejandra Olivas 26 December 2018

I know, but trust me the wait... is worth it... it took me about 11 years... and that person, although i met them, its still a work in progress, it made all the difference.

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