Thursday, October 25, 2012

I Call It Innocence Comments

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She calls school Shkool,
Never afraid to wake me up,
comes to me when weeping,
complains to me when hurt,
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Jahan Zeb
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 09 November 2012

a cute poem on a child! beautiful!

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Stevie Taite 04 November 2012

Oh how that made my heart glow! Just lovely! X

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Poetheart Morgan 30 October 2012

Good memories of mine! ! ! Good reality to you! ! ! So sweet and warm! ! ! !

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Saeed Jan 27 October 2012

Mmmm... Lovely poem, every word is replete with innocence... Reminded me of my dear niece Urooj (Beloved daughter of Jehanzeb) . I love the way she talks... innocent and loving... She calls 'School', 'Shkool'.... hahaha.... chooo shweeet.... Really lovely poem, which shows ur great love for ur sweet daughter... I wish to C her right now

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Unwritten Soul 27 October 2012

Sweet innocent cute and happy mood, that is how the shine comes from your poem! _Soul

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Akanksha Bhatt 25 October 2012

awwww...! so sweet it is. :)

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Roong S 25 October 2012

Oh that's sooo sweet! !

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