She comes to me in the quiet of night,
When all is quiet.
She touches me gently, carefully
And commands me to come.
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Sarah embodies the Dream-Woman who occupies a place in every man's psyche. Jung considered her an aspect of the Anima, and one of his colleagues Karl Kerenyi associated her with the Sister-Archetype, who is not to be confused with a biological sister. She represents the Other who is fully responsive to the individual man's dreams and desires; the person whose silence is eloquent because she intuitively understands the man; the person whose affection is never ambiguous or compromised by other social dealings. She is the Ideal, and not to be confused with a real woman. WHEW! That was fun. Your poem expresses all of this intellectual stuff in a highly charged imaginative encounter. It TRANSLATES back and forth - Intellectual argument = Lyric poem. Take your pick, no, take both - they reflect each other.
A peculiar poem of hallucinated thoughts in night and beautifully created.
remembering and constructing your thoughts of the one you missing.... her presence.. beautiful... :)