I Brushed Off Your Shadow Comments
My eyes were wide open
Babe, when I brushed off your shadow
In my dark room
I had the thrill and the chill, and my limbs
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What a thrilling poem! Congrats on being poet of the day! You deserve it.
A sweet love poem. Great imagery. Love is sublime and divine and world needs this so much now. Congrats.
The world is full of love and this love poem is so beautiful
My eyes were wide open Babe, when I brushed off your shadow ... Yes, I touched your shadow by accident./// superb and contrast loving feeling is expressed /// congrats for being selected this poem as POD
The expression of this poem is so enchanting. It would be better to have the juxtaposition of the original poem by J'ai Effleure Ton Ombre. Thank you both and congratulations for being chosen this poem as the member poem of POD.
Your perfume was on my pillows Your silent voice was whistling And disturbing the peace Which existed in my thoughts Your spirit was, with me, present- - - touching your shadow. wonderful imagination. tony
Great conceptualization, " I touched your shadow by accident" . Congrats on poem of the Day.
Wow. Now this is an amazing and very romantic poem! Nicely done Sir. Also, congrats on such a well deserved honor. Definitely a 10.
A fantastic lovely poem of the day, sir Hebert. Congrats for being chosen....10++++++
A Romantic Dream of a poem. Here Love reaches imagery, feelings Hard to forget, not often seen. Congratulation for you and this fabulous poem.
Poetry, consuming love, the thrill of the lines, Great poem about Love ****
Your silent voice was whistling. Good. Congrats
Very nice use of words. You shared story of a woman and a memory. Woman can make us wish and hope. A excellent poem.
A delicate write that hints of the lingering perfume of love. Beautiful softness to this penning. Very much enjoyed. PEACE
FAscinating, as if somebody is present through their shadow; maybe she was stalking him and the moon glow created the shadow and it was real.
Great imagery and clever play of words to express your thought. Enjoyed thoroughly. 'Your perfume was on my pillows Your silent voice was whistling And disturbing the peace Which existed in my thoughts'... is so nice. Congrats.
'Yes, l touched your shadow by accident'! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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7/27/2025 9:41:49 AM # 1.0.0
I have read this poem in French, it sounds more beautiful! Ta voix calme siffla Et a perturbé la paix Il existait au creux de mon esprit Tes pensées étaient avec moi Oui, j'ai accidentellement touché ton ombre. Je peux seulement dire: À couper le souffle! ...................A 10=+++++++ for the scintillating poem.CONGRATS for the MPOTD!