I Broke My Mirror Poem by Bharati Nayak

I Broke My Mirror

Rating: 5.0

Mirror, Mirror!
Tell me 'Am I beautiful? '
I used to ask my mirror several times a day
Feeling confident
When mirror reflects back my smile.
Wearing a new dress or trying a new hairdo
I twirl and swirl before the mirror to get a picture, perfect.
'Tell me, tell me mirror! Am I beautiful '
Mirror reflects my smile.
Then gradually , on my skin, wrinkles started to appear
Hair was getting grey
My smooth silky hair was gone
I was distressed at seeing
My receding hair lines.
Mirror, Mirror! Am I beautiful?
Mirror was taking time to say 'yes'
The number of yeses gradually decreased and stopped.
Giving my spirit a downward push.
The other day, my sweet little grand daughter
Came visiting me from America
Taking me in tight embrace, she exclaimed
'Grandma! I have never seen any one as beautiful as you!
Your white hair shines like sunshine, your lap feel like soft cushion
I don't want to leave you.
I want to hold you tight
And feel the loving light.'
A smile lit up on my face
From my mind, I threw out
The mirror's words
As I could see the beautiful 'Me'
In my grand daughter's eyes.
@Bharati Nayak

Monday, September 8, 2025
Topic(s) of this poem: mirror,image,beauty,aging,feelings
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written for a poetry challenge of Asian Literary Society for National Poetry Writing Month, April 2025
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Isadora Quagmire 08 September 2025

What a beautiful poem! ! ! Old age is truly just another type of beauty! ! ! Thank you for sharing this with all of us : )

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Bharati Nayak 30 September 2025

Thank you Isadora Quagmire! I agree with you that Old age is just another type of beauty!

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Rebecca Navarre 29 September 2025

So beautifully and heart touchingly expressed! .. Millions Of 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 29 September 2025

Ohh How preciously Beautiful! .. Love is beauty ever so deep! .. As true beauty is from within! .. And I have a feeling you shine with beauty! .. : )

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Bharati Nayak 30 September 2025

Thank you Rebecca Navarre for your wonderful comment.Your beauty shines through your beautiful words!

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Sunny Quagmire 27 September 2025

I truly loved it! xx

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Sunny Quagmire 27 September 2025

This poem brightened my day like your granddaughter brightened yours! Thank you so much for this meaningful poem!

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Bharati Nayak 30 September 2025

Thank you Sunny Quagmire for your kind comment.I am happy that you like it.

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Timber Koleden 09 September 2025

What a sweet story told in this poem! And such a profound truth told too! The imagery is well worded, and the story sings with truth! Thank you for sharing this brightening piece!

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Bharati Nayak 30 September 2025

Thank you Timber Koleden for your appreciation of the poem!

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