I Broke A Heart.. Comments

this poem reveals some real feelings

Please Note: There is no such word in English as 'dat'. It is merely a poorly spoken word for 'that'. It would enhance your poem greatly were you to change all 'dat's to 'that'. Otherwise this is a good effort. Adeline

gud one a flow of emotions is shown he's surely gona understand ur feelings.........

hey, this is also nice poem and a real feeling, u express it well appriciated job! Luwi

u r sorry..that's more than enough.. u don need to regret for that now.. he'll definitly understand that...just u need to expose ur feelings to him n everythin will be alright i loved this piece.. filled with immense feelings n emotions.. keep up the good work.

its really nice, u've written it at one go, commendable effort