I wanted to be friends but you wanted to be more
so i gave you what I thought was my all
But then it was token
and my heart was broken.
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Very interesting poem. Your despair is evident in this, and it's made the poem beautiful and raw. I hope all works out for you.
Really sad emotional read. But enthralling all the same. People like to see inside someone elses world and you managed it perfectly. Regards and Peace. Craig
I can see ' sad and despair' in this poem... So nicely written..