Sunday, September 18, 2011

- I Bet It Sucks To Be You Right Now. Comments

Rating: 2.5

I wanted to be friends but you wanted to be more
so i gave you what I thought was my all
But then it was token
and my heart was broken.
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Kara Aleid was Thomas
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Vipins Puthooran 20 September 2011

I can see ' sad and despair' in this poem... So nicely written..

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Stefanie Fontker 18 September 2011

Very interesting poem. Your despair is evident in this, and it's made the poem beautiful and raw. I hope all works out for you.

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Craig Anderson 18 September 2011

Really sad emotional read. But enthralling all the same. People like to see inside someone elses world and you managed it perfectly. Regards and Peace. Craig

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