Sunday, May 11, 2008

I Believe Comments

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Don’t blame me if my song is lifeless
Like a dead and forsaken body on the street of Lagos
Don't blame me if I sing sad songs
What is there to cheer?
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Martin Ayanbare Ayankola
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Dr Antony Theodore 10 May 2017

I am only stressing the need for you and me, To look into the mirror And create an oasis of happiness in this desert of despair To wake up from this endless slumber you end the poem I believe.......... conveying your confidence to the reader. inspite of all that is negative i believe........ very nice poem conveying such faith in your own self, in others and in God. tony

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Ashraful Musaddeq 11 September 2008

We also believe, nice poem.

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Martin Ayanbare Ayankola

Martin Ayanbare Ayankola

SAKI, OYO STATE, NIGERIA
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