I Believe Comments

'all the time, all the while i dont think am complete to get to you and hug u back is my all time destiny'... beautiful lines...sweet and expressive...good poem, Ajith...ten for you for this

Dear Ajith, Very nice lines.Very beautiful expression.. YOu have got a great way to go ahead and you hold lots of promises.

Good poem you show lots of promise you ask for suggestions well Drop the u and wanna its like you are writing a text and want to finish quick, the more you read top poems the better, keep up the good work regards

wow really sweet so u want to sleep on her lap every day wowwwwwwww beautiful -10 anjali

Yes, it's good. But is it exactly what you wanted to say in ever way you could have said it? I liked it but it felt like you were holding back. There's nothing to do but be honest in poetry.

this poem of you is very beautiful, ..though it's my first time to join here but it seems i like to write also, , , i don't know about poetries, i just want to read..you are a good writer indeed.. february