I Beg You To Live Comments

I was listening to Dark Matter by Porcupine Tree while I read this. It enhanced the mood of your poem. Very expressive.

Empathy is a gift and a burden

So heartfelt Amy, penned smoothly with so much emotions into it...Hope to read more of your poems, waiting for the next.10

i love this poem it is truely great.i love every bit of it.it really touched my heart.

Amy - You share your genuine feelings in real context. This is the heart of true poetry. The right words will always come to you. Blessings - Cheryl

A very sad and woeful tribute to a friend. One can not refrain to be sad especially reading these lines: When the wind blew West And you had other plans I felt the hollowness of your soul When you finally gave in I understood.

in flesh, she might not be with us anymore, but you have brought her to life in this poem. your choice of writting has made me feel like she was also my friend.profound. great job.

Wonderful. The power of a real friend to see, hear and touch. Those who have such friends are rich indeed. I like this poem. Keep writing.

I think we all have had friends like this at one point in our lives. nice flow. I love the end. good job. Cryatal

wonderful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

A well written love tragic...............you beg him to live........so that you can live too! ! Keep writing Amy.Good job.

do you beg someone to live or leave?