Tuesday, October 8, 2013

I Beg Of You Comments

Rating: 4.8

Long ago, pride was abandoned,
A beggar I was from the start;
A drop of love, a flake of romance
Will sustain this starving heart
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Lora Colon
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Khairul Ahsan 20 October 2013

'I never was any good at love, I have only myself to blame ' No, your writings never say that. Your heart is full of love, anyone who reads your poem is overwhelmed with love and compassion.

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John Brown 10 October 2013

What a sad poem. I hope it is pure fiction.

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Heather Wilkins 09 October 2013

dear Lora begging can only go o so long. a heart needs to be loved in return. very touching poem

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 09 October 2013

I'll even lay beneath your table And catch the crumbs that fall we are humbled in love. just a little care serves our starving heart. you ink it so beautifully, Lora.

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