I Asked That Unnamed Bird Comments

beautiful..

I Asked That Unnamed Bird................Oh my partner My heart's heart! Amazingly rendered, a wonderful partner, most mysterious, at least in my mind and eyes. Thank you for sharing!

2) I cite here few lines from your poem: Oh my partner My heart's heart Please come on And tell the world How we are In water in fire. Heart's heart is That Unnamed Bird!

1) Dear Gajanan Sir, Congratulations on being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day!

In water in fire! Great closing line. The heights and depths of love. Congrats on poem of the day!

A very nice poem! Many congratulations! !

A very thought provoking poem on life. Thanks sir for sharing.