Wednesday, January 29, 2014

I Ask Nothing But Love Comments

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I ask nothing but love

Dawn and then morning;
Love and then yearning,
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Geetha Jayakumar 27 June 2014

Beautiful poem. Flow of poem is cool and pleasant to read.....Loved reading each lines....

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Valsa George 30 January 2014

When trials come to test you, Count me, my life, my all, An offering I bring to you, my dear, I give myself to you, In return I ask you nothing but love Only love and love for ever! I feel these lines summarize it all.... What better affirmation of love one can give! Enjoyed much! !

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Dinesan Madathil 29 January 2014

But that love is the most precious and the day you are known to the other your love will be responded. A fine poem written in apt diction.

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Lyn Paul 29 January 2014

Beautiful words Deepak. Thank you

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Gajanan Mishra 29 January 2014

love and love for ever, wonderful writing, thanks Deepak.

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