I Anticipate Disaster Comments

You write with conviction and passion. Excellent work, Melanie. Regards, Sandra

People can hurt with their treacherous tongue, especially the ones closest to you, and it sounds like you've had the same experience. It's good to be prepared, but don't let it scare you. This is a wonderful poem, full of sadness and pain that I think everyone can relate to. -L.C.

Sounds like you've been hurt. It's good to protect yourself but they're not all out to get you. On the other hand, 'Just because you're paranoid doesn't mean they're not after you' (Cobain) Foster

Nice one Melanie - really good poem, Steve

Watch out what you wish for it might come true, ? ? : -) Dave nice poem