Saturday, September 10, 2011

I And My Solitude Comments

Rating: 4.5

The sunlight is made for the sun,
And the moonlight for the moon;
Pretty stars have a unique twinkling fun,
God has given them this bright boon.
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Shuaib Saifi
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Saba Urooj 04 October 2011

Awesome yar! U'v creatd v.nyc poem, i lvd it..nd i'v been ur fan...aftr readng it!

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Aqeb Benazir 18 September 2011

One major thing always makes a poem good - the ending. I always try to put my best thoughts to my endings. This one has a good end and a link with the overall context. well delivered! !

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Allemagne Roßmann 17 September 2011

Superb imageries simulating the field of loneliness......well written

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Shuaib Saifi

Shuaib Saifi

Hasanpur (Amroha) , U. P. India
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