The sunlight is made for the sun,
And the moonlight for the moon;
Pretty stars have a unique twinkling fun,
God has given them this bright boon.
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One major thing always makes a poem good - the ending. I always try to put my best thoughts to my endings. This one has a good end and a link with the overall context. well delivered! !
Superb imageries simulating the field of loneliness......well written
Awesome yar! U'v creatd v.nyc poem, i lvd it..nd i'v been ur fan...aftr readng it!