In the unclear mist,
of hasty perceptions,
the sun of reality eludes me.
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sarvesh, it astounds me, from where all this is coming from.a very solid poem, should i say, and divine in approach.thanks for sharing such beautifull work.
very profoundly written... wonderful and sublime thoughts carved into poetic verses... really has mysterious touch.... thanks for sharing lovelots, maia
rejuvenates the heart in you, reincarnated your soul to the very essence of your very being...great poem structured with finest diction....10
so profound-- this circle of birth and death awesome poem A+++ and 10++ anjali
a good one.u seem to be on the edge of to be or not to be, good better excellent, yet to be decided, is it?
it's a continous process of birth and death, isn't it, sarvesh?
yes...in many ways we die many times and take rebirths in one single life...the wise and the intelligent are aware of this...only very few of them dwell on these thoughts...and now you are one - i find deep and intelligent mental journey...10