I Am Your Wife, Touch Me Not Comments

The poem's title caught my attention.Really humerous poem though based on a real life situation.Poets have to endure such scorn in their home just because they write poem.But they would rarely leave their passion for the mundane task at home.

House tasks lot - which derail a number of people or poets.

Poetry will one day make you rot House tasks lot You are unfit to lift a pot I am 'She' not, I'm your wife Touch me not. Wow Sir, it's not mere comedy. A great picturization of the life of helpless hubbies in front of the commanding materialistic wives, so beautifully painted. Hats off Sir, I don't feel shame to show my baldness atop too. My words can't praise your poetry to the extent I wanted to. 1000++++ Subhas

A realistic beautifully yarn for a wife.

unfit to life a pot.. I am your wife, touch me not, meaningful, dear poet

Quite funny, yet a little bite to the realism! Thank you for sharing.

It is the reality of a poet's life.Poem addiction is not cur able. Poem does not put hat still the poet writes.

Comments posted by Sri Kishore K Das h is highly inspiring.Thanks

Your poem's central idea is a reality esp. tf the poem is a romantic one....but the underlying philosophy will be definitely appreciated by one and all.....in a lighter vein your lines are very much enjoyable...

Poems only aim to one's beloved, take away the poet from reality, from wife- it is the hard belief of many women against their husbands.This is devoted to those grand ladies including mine.