Friday, December 7, 2018

I Am Your Shadow Comments

Rating: 5.0

Just lend me your pains
I promise, will borrow
just put your head on my shoulder
I promise, will relieve from sorrow
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M. Asim Nehal
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Bhushan Kumar 14 December 2018

Wonderful poem, it does keep you guessing till the last line, I wish had you written few more lines of suspense for us.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 December 2018

WOW! Beautiful. Self Sacrificing love.A passionate shadow. Lovely poem from your heart. I have enjoyed very much this touching write. The title says it all. A 10 Full Vote. G.B.U. Amen.

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Valsa George 11 December 2018

Very passionate and so comforting! Love alone will enable one to take pains for another! Lovely assurance! A 10

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M. Asim Nehal

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