Monday, September 7, 2009

I Am Your Child Comments

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I Am Your Child

My eyes blaze a hole
into what is left of your soul.
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melissa mundy
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Marvin Brato 01 October 2009

Expressive and logical... hurt contains hatred that should be released in tears of passion, freedom can only be attained if acceptance and forgiveness is reached. Keep writing.

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Jerry Hughes 27 September 2009

Beautifully written poem Mel, and thanks for your prayers for my recovery. Indeed I'd love to read any or all of your essays. Always fondly, Jerry

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melissa mundy

melissa mundy

wilkes barre, pa
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