Wednesday, November 11, 2020

I Am Your Beloved Comments

Rating: 4.8

I am nowhere,
neither here nor there,
so I am everywhere.
The brush is yours,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 21 November 2020

I am your beloved. Your voice is my voice. just WOW O WOW

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Anjandev Roy 18 November 2020

Your voice is my voice......magnificent.........thank u....anjandev roy.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 November 2020

A beloved is one who is a part and parcel of you. Thought provoking poem that tingles the mind. Fascinating thoughts...

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Khairul Ahsan 13 November 2020

Oh, what a beautiful expression: 'With love when you paint me, your heart becomes my throne, and me? I am your beloved. Your voice is my voice.' - These verses may have spiritual undertones, but I am glad to take them at their face value, 'you' as my beloved and the most sought after person, not the Creator.

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Mahtab Bangalee 11 November 2020

I am nowhere, neither here nor there, so I am everywhere.// I- the mirror where not I am existed the reflected one and that’s you yes, I am you, or he or all or the self thru the all or thru the me I am all Varieties form of ONE! So I am everywhere within me or within everyone and everything

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M Asim Nehal 11 November 2020

Wow poem with a philosophical undertone. Now you are in heart, you are in mind and you are everywhere.Loved it.5***

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Bernard F. Asuncion 11 November 2020

A well conveyed poem. Truly heartwarming.....5 stars *****

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