Thursday, October 2, 2014

I Am Worried Comments

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I am worried about the stain,
'A blood stain on my attire, '
That paints my mind and faith,
With painful strain,
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Heather Wilkins 08 October 2014

the gigantic tree under its shadow tell me who did not sit uder the peace tree

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 07 October 2014

I am worried about the stain, every one has been tortured due to the vices in minds of others. Humanity is in danger. True things are expressed in this beautiful poem. Rightly said only truth is victory over all. Excellent.

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Akhtar Jawad 02 October 2014

But I know one thing: - All those try to destroy or falsify the truth, They know- Truth is the victorious undefeatable Great write.

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 October 2014

The world today is full of hatred and wars! It is very sad; but, that is how it is. Nice piece of work, Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.l.

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