I Am With You Comments

I can feel the smouldering of your heart How I wish I could fan away those aches Wipe off all the gloom from your mind Or at least share a bit of it, my dear! ....powerful expression loaded with tons of emotion. A fabulous poem....top score!

Even when you wear a mask impenetrable / You might wonder how I know of it / Is it telepathy that I can read your thoughts? / Sense the rising palpitations of your heart? ....here the word telepathy is properly used which brings a deep emotion of life. Indeed it is a lovely poem on life having an impressive inscription.10

Liked the ultimate stanza. I concur with the great Poetess in invoking the aid of Almighty God in all problems we encountered in life.

The ability of the great Poetess to understand and share the feelings of another is vividly portrayed in this marvelous write. It shows a woman of great character.

A wonderful poem that conveys kindness, care and love. Each and every line is very touching. A heartfelt write that whoever can read will feel the love and compassion pouring from the heart of the great Poetess.

Yes, sometimes we should leave it on God..............................

look up to GOD in issues you cannot handle call him to your aid when with the problems you battle excellent advice lovelty

nice poem keep it up, please come and see my poems and comment :)

Very Nice poem Valsa Ji..touched my heart.... deserves 10 out of 10

Again the sun shall show up in the East Darkness will recede and light shall descend When meadows with dew drops shall shine And woods with the song of birds will smile A very god poem expressing the pain with a hope to embrace pleasure.A very well written poem. Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

live and let others live interweave in life and believe it may have heavenly blessings nothing in life shall go as missing.. nice lines if one thinks relieve and relive in genuineness the cheers can be brought on face...

A compassionate poem that's drawn from the deep well of love! Beautifully weaved with words and the reader is easily drawn to be touched, especially the one who you care so much. I particularly liked the last stanza which gives tremendous affirmation and strength. This seem to come like a wave after wave towards the heart of the poem in the last stanza. This is one of your most beautiful ones you have written.

What a responsibility have you given to God by reminding the mortals of His inherent traits that force Him to stand by them! The optimistic tone of the poem has enough stuff to illuminate the unsuspecting minds of the millions lost in the dark world that is otherwise just apprehensive of only a half God or no God around to offer to them in the phases of their woes since times immemorial. As usual, like a devout servant toiling in the castle of an unknown master, you have sung your hymn well, Valsa madam.

Inspirational write, optimistic and a beautiful sense of joy for nature and life to allow our spirit to bloom, on our dark days there is God watching over us, God is hope for a brighter day!

i agree with amitav...soothing............optimistic to the core...............just like looking at the half filled part of the glass instead of the half empty side..

Cools, soothes and comforts a heart being so disturbed ! ! Feels a hand being extended to a soul, falling by a steep slope of a mountain.......

This is wonderfully conceived poem of consolation and help. Its generosity pours forth from a source deep within you. There are two specific ways you offer consolation. The second way takes up much of the second half of the poem, culminating in a religious appeal. But I want to focus on the first way I found in stanza six. THOUGH FAR, PLEASE KNOW I AM QUITE NEAR, SOMEWHERE SO CLOSE, ROUND THE CORNER. I AM WITH YOU AS AN UNSEEN PRESENCE. This strikes me as uniquely poetic consolation. NEAR and FAR are not being used literally, and that CORNER is not part of any material structure. A leap of poetic faith is required here by the poet and her friend. And then space and time collapse and you and your friend are mysteriously present to each other.

Or at least share a bit of it, my dear! There is someone to share in the hour of need. Soothing words and a loving message delivered. Thank you.

Great poem. So inspiring. Each and every word works like a healer's balm. Thank you Walsa for this beautiful poem. It is genuine coming straight from your heart. Love it.

Life is strange with sudden twists and turns But never ever give up, nor lose hope Believe, at any time there can be a turn around It's a often after a bleary night comes the bright morn..............................great work madam...inspiring and motivating...nice enjoyed this marvelous work