Thursday, February 4, 2016

I Am Who I Am! Comments

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Am deeper than the ocean
My waves rise and fall
They gather and pour
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PHUMLA KHANYILE
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Edward Kofi Louis 18 November 2018

Muse of life! ! I flow against the wind! ! ! ! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Antony Theodore 15 March 2016

If you want to hear me well Listen to the whirr of the winds The splashing of the waters.. you are above the surface portraying all these in such wonderful language and poetic expression. thank you tony

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Ernest Makuakua 11 March 2016

POWERFUL POEM I LIKE YOUR WRITING STYLE AND THE EMOTIONS THE PIECE BRINGS ITS STRONG AND POWERFUL

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Rajnish Manga 04 February 2016

What a wonderful portrayal of a bold and confident girl- a father's daughter. Nice poem. Thanks. I am unstoppable / I flow against the winds / I am my father's daughter / A princess of my clan / I am the strong post that holds / Who are you?

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Phumla Khanyile 04 February 2016

Oh thank you so much Rajnish...I somehow felt above the surface when I was writing this, it truly lifted me as if i was meant for me as well.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 February 2016

Self is deeper than ocean. This is very interesting and wise poem shared on definitely. Wisely penned and shared.10

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Phumla Khanyile 04 February 2016

Thank you Kumarmani, means a lot!

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