Am deeper than the ocean
My waves rise and fall
They gather and pour
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If you want to hear me well Listen to the whirr of the winds The splashing of the waters.. you are above the surface portraying all these in such wonderful language and poetic expression. thank you tony
POWERFUL POEM I LIKE YOUR WRITING STYLE AND THE EMOTIONS THE PIECE BRINGS ITS STRONG AND POWERFUL
What a wonderful portrayal of a bold and confident girl- a father's daughter. Nice poem. Thanks. I am unstoppable / I flow against the winds / I am my father's daughter / A princess of my clan / I am the strong post that holds / Who are you?
Oh thank you so much Rajnish...I somehow felt above the surface when I was writing this, it truly lifted me as if i was meant for me as well.
Self is deeper than ocean. This is very interesting and wise poem shared on definitely. Wisely penned and shared.10
Muse of life! ! I flow against the wind! ! ! ! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.