Friday, October 12, 2012

I Am Who I Am Comments

Rating: 4.5

I am who I am
Who else would I be?
I won't change for you
So why change for me?
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Lauren Kjar
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Adeline Foster 15 November 2012

A very good poem this, no forced rhymes, and the thoughts follow so concisely. It is an enjoyable read. Read mine - Who Am I - Adeline

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Lyn Paul 12 October 2012

I admire your strength Lauren. You will go such a long way. Beautiful writing.

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Michael Morgan 12 October 2012

well-done; individuality is precious. It's foolish to be cowed by the values of others, even if they insist. Resist!

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