Friday, May 8, 2009

I Am Weak. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Drowning in mid air.
While the grown men float to the top.
Choking on this cloud of smoke
while the grown men inhale deeply.
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Trinidad Villafranca
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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 May 2009

'The one victorius will be me. There is a fire inflaming my lungs When I speak They will realize I am not weak! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ' Cheers,10++ for this positive poem.

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