I Am Waiting For Her. Comments
I am waiting for her to lighten my dreams.
A Heaven's gift that will drive to the extremes.
It's written that it's not good for me to stay alone.
And I don't want to close my self in a sealed zone.
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heart yet yearns by the love longing for the sweet whispers yet it seems tobe shadowed by sorrow heart still wishful by return of love..........................most scintillating art of love, need still knows the paints of colors, most superb love story, yet painful by the reeks of detachment, yet poignant, well penned,10+, , thanks for sharing
The longingness of one's heart... the desire to love and be loved...you have expressed it well in this piece....a 10.
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7/28/2025 10:10:51 PM # 1.0.0
I am not a critic. So I don't feel like criticizing. Well done. Keep on writing.