Saturday, February 7, 2015

I Am Waiting Comments

Rating: 5.0

Many bright days have ended in the nights,
Many moon lights have ended in sun lights,
I am still waiting, I have no alternate,
Hope you'll come you are always late,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Farhan Mirza 18 February 2015

This has to be on of the best love poem.

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Farhan Mirza 18 February 2015

Beautiful poem. I can picture it in my mind.

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Salini Nair 15 February 2015

an extraordinary work....really great

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Valsa George 08 February 2015

A mother waiting for the return of her son! It seems an eternal waiting and her anxiety and pain are powerfully encapsulated! A very apt picture you have selected for the poem!

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Khalid Saifullah 07 February 2015

A very impressive poem......................10

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