*i Am Waiting Comments

I am waiting........yet let the love gushes out and pour on those in the world suffers and relief their pains.....love is a reservoir........really a poem of thought.......

waiting, waiting, like a volcano about to explode...with love! ! !

! Unleash it Bob! on this old world feelings, untold love unfurled the greatest gift we all possess is an act of love, that is our best

a pleasure to read.You good heart shines. Love this Hugs, Meggie

There is some goodness in the world, but sometimes it doesn't seem that way, a lovely poem Bob full of imagery and hope, Well said, 10 Lynda xx

A lovely poem with amazing imagery. 10+

A good waiting...a waiting for the goodness of all others...where to find a chest a box to hold this much love, Bob? That is the trouble in life...many empty boxes all around...reluctant to open out for containing good ness...a well thought out write 10

It is always the way a message is said is all that counts.......hard realities, tough messages told through sweet words always will be remembered for ever........thanks for this classic.

the fruit is full of promise the nut yet to be born the chrysalis confines the butterfly with a key who's lock is worn the flood gates they will open with a downpour from above God decides our readiness when we fill this world with love another clasicc Bob! your a treasue

well written u get 10++

Some fine metaphors fill this poem about transformation. There is a personal dimension to this heartfelt piece too, methinks. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

The imagery you used here Bob is vivid and meaningful. Making us all want that waiting attitude, because like you I am sure it will come, it will 'cover the earth as the waters cover the very sea' - all we need as we wait is faith and hope.A beautiful short piece.

fine indeed! .......nice comparison........10+