Thursday, May 20, 2010

I Am Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

I crawl, I creep,
I walk, I run.
Like an undulating river I rest not
and wait for none.
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Dr Antony Theodore 24 August 2015

From a larva to a butterfly, from an acorn to an oak tree from an embryo to an elephant, I make nothing stay permanently. i l ove these lines Gita. your meditation on time and your imagination combined with reflection gives this poem a special charm. thank you

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They say time waits for no man BUT in God's time everything is made beautiful. Just like your poem, Beautiful! ; D

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Dr.subhendu Kar 02 June 2010

You sense me in the ticking of a clock; you sense me in the beating of a heart. Like camphor, I’m known to sublime. Well, that’s me, I am Time.............................. . .i m the truth absolute from reality to illusion embracing all entireties infinite to eternity i am the Revelations in ages and eons all that happen to happen milling through me..........amazing write, yet sui-generis,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 01 June 2010

Amazing concept and conceptualized. ‘I make bad things cease to happen/and all good things come to an end….push-pull …lolol Time repeats and completes…also best healer and killer...thanks for sharing 10/10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Preetam Shetty 01 June 2010

But I make sure I leave imprints of me in your mind’s calendar. As you embark on your life’s journey, To me you always surrender. Hats off.....those two words speak it all

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Shona Sengupta 22 May 2010

i really really wish i could stop time! ! ! nice poem and very true.

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