Thursday, June 7, 2007

I Am The Youth Of Today Comments

Rating: 3.7

i am the hoodie you pass on the street
i am the one you dread to meet
i am the one in the park
i am the one who stands outside in the dark
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Adi Cox 24 March 2011

I like this poem. The last line 'I am your next local cop' gives it a twist. Are you the under cover police or are you the next to be arrested? I am unclear but it gives your poem an undecided element that is interesting. nice poem 10/10.

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Shekhar Joshi 07 June 2009

ofcourse thats the youth of today.......hope situation changes........ good work

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Daniel Hooks 08 June 2007

great poem katie it shows great promise. Dan

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