I Am The Whirlwind Comments
Outside,
The wind breathes through me
As though it was alive
And I was the element
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Great write Rome! I love the angles of my mind and echoes of forever lines brilliant! One little thing, formally, the last stanza I am a whirlwind should it perhaps be the whirlwind because the poem has a great specificity to I and using an indefinite article didn't quite seem to fit this unique beautifully destructive image All the best, man
I am a whirlwind Storming through eternity, Impressing my passing journey Into the Earth's tranquility... this poem is itself a whirlwind storming through the eternity. with best regards
Yes, this is the sound of the ocean/wind inside a shell: the sound of eternity. It is a haunting allusion you make that transports one to those turbulent places only to be nestled back in the safety of the earth mother. Well done Romeo.
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8/3/2025 5:41:39 AM # 1.0.0
absolutely love this poem. well said, my friend!