Thursday, June 20, 2013

I Am The Slave Of Your Eyes Comments

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You have only two, enough to take away my sleeps
and I being your instance, searching mearly here and there.
and you know how to hypnotize humans, a perfectionist
and thinking you my every bit, nights are spending it.
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Vishal Sharma
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Neela Nath Das 26 March 2017

Beautiful poem.After a long time I entered here in this wonderful domain of poetry.Read this poem and can't but say WoW

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Heather Wilkins 27 June 2013

excellent poem about eyes.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 24 June 2013

A lovely poem beauty that penetrates through the eyes

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Farah Ilyas 21 June 2013

wao fabulous poem indeed...i think u r spelled bound by someone surely: -)

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David Wood 21 June 2013

The eyes lead staight to the soul. A good write.

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Simran Arora 21 June 2013

Nice one....mainly d titl...

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Poetheart Morgan 20 June 2013

I think she hypnotized you in a special way Poet. Dont run just face it, the two enchanted eyes.

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Abhishek Mishra 20 June 2013

Awesome..when will u write JEE?

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Survi Sharma 20 June 2013

nicely penned, great title

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