Tuesday, September 23, 2008

I Am The Sea Comments

Rating: 5.0

My pace deliberately slows as I approach the cliff.
So soon your rumbling music will caress my ears.
And wave after growling wave will roll to greet me,
Like some fast approaching storm.
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Neil Graham Marsden
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Jurietta Duraan 24 September 2008

Stunning, sensual poem.... I can't believe no-one else has commented yet. I usually skip long poems, but this one had me from the first to the last line... beautiful and powerful images portrayed... thanks

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