I am black, white, yellow and brown.
I am a quadruped, biped and a triped.
I am physically and mentally challenged.
I am beautiful, adventurous and fierce.
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These are just some words attributed to your self. I guess you might like my poem ''I Am...
An exquisite poem with the aftertaste still lingering. Thanks for sharing your work!
I like this poem. You've done a nice job with very few words of conveying our complexities yet commonalities. I think starting each line with 'I am' was a nice convention. Well done!
This poem really caught my attention connected with it you are so very talented
A very nice philosophical poem however the sentence I am a paraplegic is not quite what most people would identify with, as it is a very specific physical description that is not quite as metaphoric as a poet may hope for. I do admire your attempt to be inclusive and all embracing of the human race. A very ambitious goal in any poem.
You are amazing and this poem needs a wider audience, it's short and to the point. I love it.....
Hi Jeremy I found this fun and interesting but I would like I am a believer. I think the article must be there. Paul
Hello Jeremy. I enjoyed this poem. It is different. It is thought provoking and nice to read. Loyd
This is a great summary of the complexity of what a living human being is and the interconnectedness of the whole human race in a sense. Whether we want to admit to it or not.
Yes, we all share the same fear, hope, pain, love, we all have our needs and demands
all the facets of human temperaments........simple and summative...hope u can spare some time to go thru my poems too...
We are filled with so many different emotions that are blown by the wind scattering our thoughts and opinions but in the end we're all the same! Great write!
Wonderful, excellent. Very nice poem. I like the message very much Please give your opinion too about my poem, Y.... Differences
fine write, beautiful adventurous and fierce