Saturday, February 14, 2015

I Am The Same Comments

Rating: 4.1

I am black, white, yellow and brown.
I am a quadruped, biped and a triped.
I am physically and mentally challenged.
I am beautiful, adventurous and fierce.
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Jeremy Horsford
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Gerry Legister 06 December 2015

fine write, beautiful adventurous and fierce

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Adrienne Crawford 11 October 2015

It makes you think I liked the idea of it. well done

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Sina Farajzadeh 05 October 2015

These are just some words attributed to your self. I guess you might like my poem ''I Am...

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Sofia Kioroglou 03 October 2015

An exquisite poem with the aftertaste still lingering. Thanks for sharing your work!

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Julie Kops 25 September 2015

beautiful truth well done :)

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Sranisha Francis 21 September 2015

I am different, but I am the same. I liked this poem,

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Pamela Sinicrope 16 September 2015

I like this poem. You've done a nice job with very few words of conveying our complexities yet commonalities. I think starting each line with 'I am' was a nice convention. Well done!

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Langeni Ayeza 07 September 2015

Nice one like the way you are playing with words

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Lynn More 22 August 2015

This poem really caught my attention connected with it you are so very talented

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Briony Nicholls 15 August 2015

A very nice philosophical poem however the sentence I am a paraplegic is not quite what most people would identify with, as it is a very specific physical description that is not quite as metaphoric as a poet may hope for. I do admire your attempt to be inclusive and all embracing of the human race. A very ambitious goal in any poem.

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Melvina Germain 14 August 2015

You are amazing and this poem needs a wider audience, it's short and to the point. I love it.....

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Vanessa Kouassi 29 July 2015

very nice one keep going!

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Paul Amrod 26 July 2015

Hi Jeremy I found this fun and interesting but I would like I am a believer. I think the article must be there. Paul

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Jeremy Horsford 30 July 2015

Thank you for pointing that out. Amendment made.

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 17 June 2015

Hello Jeremy. I enjoyed this poem. It is different. It is thought provoking and nice to read. Loyd

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Raymond Farrell 08 June 2015

This is a great summary of the complexity of what a living human being is and the interconnectedness of the whole human race in a sense. Whether we want to admit to it or not.

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Vian Sabri 03 June 2015

God writing, god poem, keep on and thanks to share me it

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Vian Sabri 03 June 2015

Yes, we all share the same fear, hope, pain, love, we all have our needs and demands

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Soulful Heart 18 May 2015

all the facets of human temperaments........simple and summative...hope u can spare some time to go thru my poems too...

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Hazel Durham 15 May 2015

We are filled with so many different emotions that are blown by the wind scattering our thoughts and opinions but in the end we're all the same! Great write!

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Hans Vr 11 May 2015

Wonderful, excellent. Very nice poem. I like the message very much Please give your opinion too about my poem, Y.... Differences

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Jeremy Horsford

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