Thursday, July 12, 2012

I Am The Pretty Girl-Chapter One Comments

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Pretty Hurts
 I am the  pretty one,

the one the girls hate
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Lonnie Hicks
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Chris Blazo 16 August 2012

Chapter Two? I think a good writer can write from any perspective and be flawless. Like they actually lived it. You did it sir! It's almost like you saw this girl on a crowded bus, ferry, or train. Jealousy is a powerful emotion. Great story-poem. Must have taken some time.

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