Hey Louis, I came across this one and the rhyme is superb.
If I can suggests; after the 3rd line adding a line like this "what do you take me for?" or something like that. It wd taste different.
Thanks for sharing
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Hey Louis, I came across this one and the rhyme is superb. If I can suggests; after the 3rd line adding a line like this "what do you take me for?" or something like that. It wd taste different. Thanks for sharing