I Am The One 2 Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

I Am The One 2



This love,
On this love;
I am the one you are searching for! !
Come in,
Take a ride with me!
Be my bride,
But, not with pride.

Friday, May 12, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: fantasy fiction,request,writing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Antonio Williams 12 May 2017

Hey Louis, I came across this one and the rhyme is superb. If I can suggests; after the 3rd line adding a line like this "what do you take me for?" or something like that. It wd taste different. Thanks for sharing

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