Thursday, October 8, 2009

I Am The Lightning That Strikes Your Heart Comments

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I am the lightning that strikes your heart
I am your eagle and your dove
I am the ocean of hope in your spiral truth
That floods your empty heart with love
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R. Ariffin
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Patti Masterman 09 October 2009

I can't believe this beautiful poem had no comments. Your poetry is like a lovely cove just beside a lighthouse, glowing from within a supernatural light, and lucky is the person who goes just far enough to find it. I love the recurring theme of the lighthouse in your writing.

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Johor, Peninsular Malaysia
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