Saturday, December 29, 2018

I Am The King Comments

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Below the naughty brain of seventy three plus
Two eyes though affected by the cataract
Can't read without two concave lenses
But below the eyes there is a heart intact.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Mahtab Bangalee 01 January 2019

o its great rapture on self kingdom- Where there is beauty there are my eyes Where there are my eyes there is beauty /// love it very much

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Khalid Saifullah 31 December 2018

I shall repeat the words, long live the king. His poetry is immortal.

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Bharati Nayak 30 December 2018

Deprived of cake, sweets and custard To my craze of sweetness sweet love I feed. The aesthetic fountain that rises from my heart Makes my empire green, fertile and wonderful I counter my enemies with the drugs of love - - - - -With love in heart you will surely defeat the physical pain.Such a wonderful poem, thanks for sharing.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 December 2018

I concur with Kim Barney's beautiful comments. Long live the King! A great poem beautifully written.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 December 2018

Physical pain and suffering can never derail the loving heart and mighty mind of a King.! Yes, love of God and family are powerful drugs that counteract physical pain. A great poem of a great man of character, poet and philosopher and most of all a loving king of his kingdom.

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Kim Barney 29 December 2018

I enjoyed reading this, Akhtar. Long live the King!

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