Friday, August 3, 2012

I Am The Idea Comments

Rating: 4.5

Born in the womb of your creativity
I am the Line
Lovingly caressed by your hands
Slim; smooth; shapely.
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Deepak Manchanda of Delhi
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George Becker 11 August 2012

Interesting to me. The strength of his nature amongst the salts of the earth is he. Steered with wisdom and sweet silence he is a mystery.

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John Hayes 10 August 2012

Speak out-I like the style of this poem...

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Ngwa Louis 09 August 2012

Great poem. it kept me thinking about my life from conception till birth and what lies ahead. much to digest.

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Avik Datta Gupta 03 August 2012

Wonderfully written Deepak Ji

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Deepak Manchanda of Delhi

Deepak Manchanda of Delhi

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