I Am The Daughter Of The Sun And The Sea Comments

I enjoyed reading this poem, I thought it was excellent and flowing, I will look forward to reading more, best wishes Lynda

eight excellent comments, besides mine... reveals, you are a poetic piece of poetic work. continue.

This is an excellent poem, Anita. Well done and thank you for asking me to give my opinnion. In truth, I believe it is good... there is a hidden message back there that people will have to dig for to find out. Well done. I look forward to reading more of your poems. Babs

You have dug deep into your soul for this one Anita this is a very good poem with strong currents of spirtualism and shows your strong links to Nature and your ancestral past beautiful work Anita

hi im sorry for the late reply i just read your request so thanks for asking me for my opinion, anyway i enjoyed reading it its like reaching invisible places and dealing with unseen charecters, and finally i liked it because its one that you have to really think of what every sentence means

It really reflect a work of a poet who has indeed clocked the milestone. totally classy and advancd, rich and intellectually provoking....Great piece, I enjoyed reading it over and again. Congratulations to you Anita.

This 'may' be a little bit cerebral for most readers. However, your depictions are absolutely from a higher state of consciousness that must be read and enjoyed over and over again. Anita, we, you and I and the all of humanity are indeed creations/origins of this planet. Just as it is a living, all knowing and productive being. We reflect what it wishes as 'It' conducts with us this experiment called 'life'! I enjoyed this poem. Congratulatons!

Dear Anita, You stick your neck out, and say, 'here, cut it off'. So I have a problem, because I like you. And I have been in this business a very short time, so I don't trust myself. I can criticize you of things I am guilty of myself. With that as a prologue, here is my evaluation: The rythm is not perfect. Not that it has to be, but it jars slightly, at points. Also the content sounds a little too self aggrandizing for my taste. And some of the metaphors make me itch. So please forgive me. I will say that it is much better than most of the 16 year old nonsense there is on this site.