Saturday, September 1, 2012

I Am The Crow Comments

Rating: 4.3

As I once again
walk through the valleys of death
I feel my soul rising
I feel the crow guiding me
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Dave Alan Walker
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Eric Cockrell 16 September 2012

a day of hope is coming!

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Matt Mooney 12 September 2012

This fine poem strikes a note for me. I think that this theme may be echoed in my poem 'The Fledgling'.10.

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Smoky Hoss 06 September 2012

I'm with you on this one Dave; good expression.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 04 September 2012

Different culture see the crows differently, but the scavenging crows play a major role in our super natural belief! the gifted crows! Nice poem, Dave!

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 04 September 2012

In the darkness fight with the light.....very good writing with nice aspects..lovely one..we should resist in front of the demons and darkness that is surrounded us in this global. we should wake up and fight with devil....devil and darkness will fall for sure. for sure. Nice write dear Dave.

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Heather Wilson 01 September 2012

The world certainly needs something to lift it out of evil, maybe, just maybe the crow will lead the way-.nice one Dave.

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Valerie Dohren 01 September 2012

We al hope that the devil will fall - good one Dave.

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