I am,
God the creator
Loving father,
Forgiving incarnate,
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Read this poem very minutely and it is another beautiful projection of God's role, splendid imagery put into here and made a strong expression altogether. Yours is no less good and a ranked poem too. I've concentrated on Earth where you've covered up the whole galaxy. Thanks for sharing.10+ Gautam
Clad with the great garment of compelling creativity. Well done my friend.10+
An awesome dedication to the Almighty. It reminded me of the Mahabharat where Krishna reveals His 'viraat roop' to Arjun on the battlefields of Kurukshetra.
A daily spoonful of cod liver oil an adiction from mum keeps me feeling good, but a spoonful of your poems excells everything your words are a sight for sore everything.....this poem soooo elegant++++++++10 regards
some sweet words from Sujit Sinha From: Sujit Sinha (Bhavnagar India; Male; 54) To: Anjali Sinha Date Time: 8/18/2009 6: 24: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: hello sir I was away to attend to mundane matters and saw your mail today. The poem is bewitchingly charming. It delighted me and I am marking it as my favourite. Keep it up Sujit Sinha
The poem is terrific The poet is prolific Another brilliant piece of Anjali's poetic. TOP 500-CONGRATS.
god one gets a person thinking and it was written on my birthday.
god is great Creator and ruler of the universe. n u did a superb job....very well work done here and deserve a 10+++ maan gaye aapko n its in top 500 n itmust be
ye vakai achhi hai hard astronomy brought t life ovrwhelsm the pain n strife...
I should say this poem deserves to be in top 500... This is a different and innovative one by Anju, I know I did comment on this one earlier... I have studied many great works of great poets too, this one deserves a spot among the very best I think...... very powerful write.. I mean I haven't seen such a poem written by any one... Reading this poem has been a novel experience for me! ! ! ! congrats! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! with love shan
He is the great Creator and ruler of the universe. You did a superb job here and deserve a 10+++ Your friend Lynn
I agree with your P.S. Not just the names, but our images of God cannot compare with the reality. But we have nothing else to use to express ourselves.
Just took me on a whirlwind tour of the universe from a different perspective. Beautiful vivid imagination.10 stars (includin all the 9 official planets)
Sublime beauty that sweeps me away to the stars......... 10++++++++++++++++++++
Interesting flow of cosmic words...so just jovially, just jovially, may I call you 'Navagraha Naayaki'
I play ball with time on playground of universe....I respect the freedom of expressing your soul.