Monday, June 25, 2018

I Am That Rock Comments

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I am that rock in which the fossils sleep
Deep as the heresies of a disused creed,
Layer on layer the insulating self
Protects its many anguished cries
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Tom Billsborough
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Bharati Nayak 27 June 2018

I am that rock in which the fossils sleep Deep as the heresies of a disused creed, Layer on layer the insulating self Protects its many anguished cries and falsifies its memories. Ageing now, my mind solidifies, A polished limestone cave .............What a wonderful metaphor for past memories ! ! Just love this poem.

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Anna Aitken 25 June 2018

Wow Tom what a write. Brilliant. You just keep getting better and better.

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tom billsborough 25 June 2018

Thanks Bill. The Baudelaire quote in full is Hypocrite Lecteur, mon semblable, mon frere. Hypocrite reader, my double, my brother. Must read some of your poems later.

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Bill Cantrell 25 June 2018

Wow, very nice write, your word choice is brilliant!

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