Saturday, October 3, 2015

I Am Sun Rising In Your Sky Comments

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I know you are powerful
By your command I rise
I am sun with rays more
To light humanity I come
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Lubinda Lubinda 11 October 2015

Great poem about the sun. God blesses us with sunlight every day. I like the way you present it in this poem. I enjoyed reading it!

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Daniel Brick 05 October 2015

What a wonderful poem of gratitude! Your description of the sun doing its work of illumination is brilliant just like the light streaming from it. Your words create a whole new, imaginative solar system whose energy and beauty you bring to earth, put into this poem and share with us your readers. I feel both heat and illumination from your sun.

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M Asim Nehal 05 October 2015

Superb....Wonderful poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 October 2015

I know you support me; with the muse of creation in the hands of the Creator. Nice piece.

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Lyn Paul 03 October 2015

To light humanity I come A beautiful flow of words penned.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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