Friday, September 26, 2008

I Am Strong Comments

Rating: 5.0

This is my first attempt to write free verse so it will not be very good.

I dont need a shoulder to cry on.
I dont need strong arms to hold me up.
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Shadowed Past 03 October 2008

This is really good for a first free verse. It's also something a lot of people can relate to. You pretty much told 3 years of my life's story in one poem, which I think is amazing

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Anastasia Starlena 29 September 2008

I have trouble with free verse myself and I have been writing awhile. I think though this is a very good poem. I think it is clear and concise full of emotion. Awesome for an first attempt.

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