Monday, December 1, 2008

I Am Still Tongue-Tied...! ! ...! ! ! ... Comments

Rating: 4.9

I'll walk with u for over miles and miles,
& adorn our relationship wit unparalleled-unlike lifestyles..

Drizzle my love on YOU - who is a grandeur,
...
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Neha Aradhye
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Sweet love poem

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Yaseen Anwer 12 December 2008

Dear u rock with dis master piece very small and very deep well constructed deserve 10 on10... Regards Yas

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Gargi Saha 09 December 2008

A very beautiful romantic poem. Y get 10++...........

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premji premji 04 December 2008

nehaa, beautiful lines... loveeeeeeeeeee! 0***********

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Sathyanarayana M V S 02 December 2008

Nicely romantic. But needs to be properly structured and pruned at places...........8

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Deependra Kumar Jha 02 December 2008

Lovely feelings! I admire your commitment and passion..and I do hope that you will be able to walk for 'over miles and miles' in Love.

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C. P. Sharma 01 December 2008

Beautiful, For love we live, In love we die, In love's ocean ever dive. CP

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Dhanesh Aradhye 01 December 2008

hey, nice one dear. 'Drizzle my love on YOU - who is a grandeur' I gues your Love will be more grand than his. I loved this line. keep rocking... :)

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Kesav Easwaran 01 December 2008

lost in dedicated love...'drizzle my love on you' is a line really pleasing to read...good piece, Neha...i give you ten

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 01 December 2008

Hey...a very different poem...loved it...crafted with an uncanny creativity. 'YOU signify the strings that are paired in courses in a guitar..' wonderful....thanks.

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rohit sapra 01 December 2008

This poem displays a well made creation done through very good usage of words which reflects lot of creativity.

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Joseph Poewhit 01 December 2008

'Drizzle my love on you' - BREATHLESS

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Reshma Ramesh 01 December 2008

nice love poem there........well penned! !

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 01 December 2008

Your love............i love the music in you.........artistic!

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! ~ RAJNISH JENA ~! 01 December 2008

ohhhh thats so cute so sweet really a cute poem.....

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Neha Aradhye

Neha Aradhye

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