I'll walk with u for over miles and miles,
& adorn our relationship wit unparalleled-unlike lifestyles..
Drizzle my love on YOU - who is a grandeur,
because YOU signify the strings that are paired in courses in a guitar..
You'll always be my prerogative,
MY sweet-hearten, soft-hearten festive...
Beautiful, For love we live, In love we die, In love's ocean ever dive. CP
hey, nice one dear. 'Drizzle my love on YOU - who is a grandeur' I gues your Love will be more grand than his. I loved this line. keep rocking... :)
lost in dedicated love...'drizzle my love on you' is a line really pleasing to read...good piece, Neha...i give you ten
Hey...a very different poem...loved it...crafted with an uncanny creativity. 'YOU signify the strings that are paired in courses in a guitar..' wonderful....thanks.
Dear u rock with dis master piece very small and very deep well constructed deserve 10 on10... Regards Yas
Nicely romantic. But needs to be properly structured and pruned at places...........8
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Lovely feelings! I admire your commitment and passion..and I do hope that you will be able to walk for 'over miles and miles' in Love.